The East Drosophilia
River.
(from Looking at 'The Falling River'
an essay by a student at the University of Ex.)
"The best
poets who write about nature expand their meaning beyond their
subject matter," wrote Pittaya Songpit in his essay Earth and
Death. "They are either contemplative from a human point of
view, or else through their words they turn themselves into trees
and blades of grass and view the world from that direction." Agnes
Moulcrumpet's poem 'The Falling River' attacks its subject matter,
the East Drosophilia River, from both angles. Songpit's 'or else' is
eliminated. The river's rocky bed is first described from the point
of view of an onlooking human:
"Its bed is all the
bric-a-brac of mountains Stones and beaten rocks and scars and
earth."
Later, the poet becomes the river and speaks to the
onlooker, chiding her for attempting to describe something that she
does not really comprehend. In this way, the poem 'expand(s its)
meaning beyond its subject matter.' This writer lived by the East
Drosophilia River before he came to Ex, and Moulcrumpet's
description of the river's vigour is exactly accurate. Drosophilia
breaks away from the River Fly at a wild spot, and keeps getting
wilder the longer it flows. As Moulcrumpet writes:
"Its
mouth eats unruly mobs In a ruthless rush."
The earth in
the Falling Hills is inhospitably hard and infertile. The river runs
along a rough channel, carved out of this hard earth by persistance
and blunt force. Cold Hills winds drive the temperature of the water
down so low that people from other parts of the country who
recklessly bathe in the East Drosophilia often die of shock or
exposure. Hence:
'Your blood will not heat me'
and
'I am the eternal storehouse. Without locks ...'
The last two lines are a reference to the bodies that
disappear into the Drosophilia and are never seen again. We used to
see that happen about five times a year in our part of the river.
Someone once said that it was easier to find dead bodies in the
river than it was to find fish, but that isn't true. We used to
catch fish all the time. Ferrypeople who travel on the East
Drosophilia say that it has some of the best fish in the country.
Falling Hills Sliders and Cocky Walkers may be smaller than the fish
in warmer places, but they still taste good. The river is shallow
compared to the Fly, so the crustaceans that live on the bottom are
easier to catch. There's a lot of food if you can dare to go in the
water.
"I shrink but don't diminish..."
In fact
that's not true. The Drosophilia turns into a collection of streams and ponds
that fade away into the ground. However, Moulcrumpet's words do
express the way the river stays with you even when it isn't there.
It isn't big in size, but it has a determination that you don't see
in rivers that run through friendlier countrysides."
Geographical note: The East Drosophilia branches off the
Fly River and follows an irregular path upward through the Falling
Hills, almost to the Forest of Ex. It can easily be identified on
our map of
Umbagollah even though it is not marked by name.
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